I am learning to
- Make my writing more interesting and easier to read
Success Criteria
- Include many ideas in my stories.
- Put a capital letter that the beginning of each idea.
- Put a full stop at the end of each idea.
I went to a pet day. I brought my dog. Campbell saw me walking around. Dad came with me. My dog is called Charlie. I love him because he sat still when I said sit.
Teacher Feedback
Anaru, you included six ideas in this story and all of your sentences have a fullstop at the end. Most of you sentences start with a capital letter.
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